The window opens
But just ever so slightly
Must squeeze through, breathless
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Ahh, that precious breathe of fresh air! Lots of images come to mind when reading your poem, well done!
thanks Peg–my work here is done!
Ooh, I really like this one. You are very talented you know :).
thank you–and you are very good for my ego…..
A huge story here, in three short lines. Brilliant.
it is a life story isn’t it?
It spells “Freedom.”
I like that…….
I like you. 🙂
Thanks for the smile
who knew you could make such soulful friends this way–am so glad
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