English: Title page of Miscellany Poems, on Several Occasions (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
I have given up on writing haiku for the meantime – so here are my little poems–they hopefully need no rhyme or reason to exist:
1.
Nights come sooner now
Days, shorter and cooler but
Sparkle ~ it is autumn
2.
Night calms me
The day’s worries are done
Relax, reflect, read.
3.
Night stars sprinkled above
I see no dipper or dove
Just the magic of the deep dark.
Poetry is an… (Photo credit: liber(the poet);)
I like each one…no 2 especially. Very well done
thank you very much – I am encouraged!
All three are lovely and special.
thank you so much
Autumn does sparkle….all three are a pleasure to read.
thank you – did you check out my real M post–just for you
They are all very well done.
appreciate that – thank you very much!:)
Magic of the deep dark~~very romantic! (Except for at 4 a.m. when you haven’t slept. Then it becomes the Nasty Night. lol!)
yes I am not talking middle of the sleepless night nights – there is no magic there
Great work. My favorite is the second. It describes how I feel about the evenings and what I do, too.
we need those evenings so we can get through the next day
Beautifully written my friend, I especially enjoyed number 3
Cheers
Choc Chip Uru
thanks so much
I love Lou Ann, Simple, clean and beautiful.
Thank you Brigitte–how are you feeling –I hope better!
Better, thank you. Not 100 percent, but getting there.
take good care of yourself – it has been a while since you have been under the weather as they say (hugs)
Awesome.
awesome is good – thank you very much
N – Niiiiice
why thank you RoSy
Love all three – well done
Thank you for saying so
I LOVE #3!
thank you – you like a little night magic too!
I am loving number 2 !
thank you – I like that one too (humble eh?)
What lovely autumny haiku. I love the sparkle of Autumn, that’s exactly what it does especially in the early mornings with the dew drops everywhere.
Why are you giving up on writing haiku? They are so lovely.
Not giving up- just a haikuetus
That’s brilliant! I love the way you play with words!
I like these!
I can’t figure out how to write Haiku but I love the flow of them
and I like all of these…
Take Care…
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ladyblue
thank you – coming from you that is a great compliment!